Memories hava value in life is that I have learned from working in various positions in working lift.
I was chosen as president of the school Go club 3 years running,has the most members than any club that is established in school and I have also received vice win against Go.
Go is a game type that think that we know this is a strategy game with game rules are not difficult,but the depth and difficulty of the game.
This strategy allows me to practice the idea of running a plan and create a good straegy. I proud to be taught to play Go.And can take the Go club members go compete in national award winning runner in the national competition Go ago.
Part1
1. “ I have learned from working in various positions “ I really like it. I feel you have experience for play Go, study , and spend time.
2. You want to say about Go is the most memory.
3. Story should talk about Go tool, time for play, and competition in Thailand.
4. I like this story , but you should have conjunction (but, and ,or, so) and time signals(next, then).
5.In five and six sentences. You do not start the sentence with “and”
Part2
1.c=2
2.o=2
3.v=2
4.g=2
5.s=3
part 1
1.The sentense "I feel proud to be taught to play Go" I love that you are proud of what you do and you do it well.
2. Go Is The Most Memory
3.You talk about the memory of Go, you should write about Go more.
4.- The first sentence is irrelevant, you should delete them out.
- Some words are missspelling such as have and life.Check them out.
5.You do not start the sentence with “and” .
part 2
C = 2,O = 2 ,V = 2,G = 2,S = 2
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Part 1:
1.I like this sentence “ I was chosen as president of the school "Go club" 3 years ”.Because I feel you have experience for play “ Go” very well.
2. You want to describe your the most memorable event in my life. 3. You should use listing order signals in your writing. However,it would be better if you add an interesting concluding sentence.
4. Check how to use comma in compound sentence.Some words ars misspelling such as hava and straegy.Check them out!
5. Check grammatical error in some the sentences.
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Part 2:
C = 2
O = 2
V = 3
G = 2
S = 2
Part 1:
1. Your paragraph is well-organized. I like this paragraph because it is activity on free time.
2. Writer want to describe about activity that the most memorable event in your life.
3. In paragraph, you use transition signals such as First, Second, In addition, and Next to tell your reader that these are main points. Some words are missspelling. Check them out!
4. You should check spelling and grammar better than this. You often have a concluding sentence at the end.
5. You are missspelling “hava”-“have”.
The two last sentences, you should be write compound sentence.
Part 2:
C = 2
O = 2
V = 3
G = 2
S = 2